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Jan 14, 2013, 10:54:18 PM
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:icontorivarn:
After several weeks of quiet aurora-activity combined with cloudyweather, I finally found a place so clear that I couldn't remember the last time I saw the stars that brightly shining.
I hope you guys enjoy the view as much as I did :)
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:iconliamtown:
I really like how you've laid out this photo. On a first glance, it looked as if he was actually spray painting the aurora across the sky. This set up made for an intriguing way of viewing the image.

My eyes sort of struggle to find a focal point in this image. While the person makes the image interesting, he also has the potential to make it distracting. The highlights around the edges of his body, coupled with the lack of lighting on his back, draw my attention away from the sky. This would be fine if I had a solid point to look at on his body, but the lack of a focal point makes that challenging and keeps my eyes wandering.

The sky at the top might benefit from a little extra contrast. The problem with night photography is that dimmer stars can end up looking like dust or dents in the lens. You might try overlaying a digital filter and reducing its opacity to see if it enriches this section of the photograph. This may just be my personal preference, however.

These are just some minor things I noticed, overall it's an outstanding photo. :)
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~ItachiJiraiya Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
beautiful :D
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Mood: Joy *torivarn Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks alot :)
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~ItachiJiraiya Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
no problemo
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Mood: Joy *torivarn Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Cheers :)
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:iconbizkit66:
Mood: Love ~Bizkit66 Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist
Thats such an epic place to be, im glad you seem to appreciate it :-)
One day i will come see too :D
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:icontorivarn:
Mood: Joy *torivarn Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks alot :) I hope you'll get the chance :)
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:iconbizkit66:
Mood: Love ~Bizkit66 Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist
Welcome, me too :D
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Mood: Love ~Lionpelt-66 Jan 16, 2013  Student Photographer
When you don't zoom in it looks a little as though the person is spraying green graffiti in the air or on the sky :D
Anyway, great shot! :omfg: You must have been so lucky!
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Mood: Joy *torivarn Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
It's a beautiful phenomena indeed :)
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