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Golden reflection by minniminnimi

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Hey!

You wanted me to write you a critique for this one. As I tell everyone I write for; don't mind the star-ratings, they aren't informative.

Photographically:
I like you exposure here, you've got some nice silhouttes. I would recommend if possible to trying a slightly narrower aperture to reduce the highlights in the sun some.
It's difficult for me to see, but I guess your horizon could have been tilted slightly down on the righthandside.

Post-processing:
I would love to see some sharpening on the silhouttes and I'd recommend you to just paint the sunflare you've got on the threes away, apart from that I like the temperature in this image.

All in all a nice image. A tip for the future is to be aware that to really have a great sunset image is that the foreground needs to be attractive. It doesn't need to be very advanced, but maybe something like the floatingbridge you got on one of your other shots like this one.

Hope this was helpful :D
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